Twinkling Starz

Wow, this a great poem. You can edit it a bit, but its great how it is. Good work!

Thank you all for your comments, especially Writersdomain, you helped me out alot. My edited second version: Quiet daydreams and distant memories Whisk my heart in light so sweet. Take ...

Great shading! I love the wolf/fox...

Very amusing. I really like this poem... Good work.

Hey, welcome...I hope you have a nice time here.

Great work, I like the first one best.

Daydreams and distant memories Whisk my heart in light so sweet. Take me by the hand, Feel your toes in sun-kissed sand… Innocent and carefree, Thoughts swim into my head. ...

Haha, very short and amusing! The pee dot ess dot made me smile...

I like the way you conveyed your feelings into this poem, and the words you chose were well-chosen. Good work..

I like it! I love abstract things, and I too, would hang it on a wall...

I like it, it gives feeling for writers everywhere. Good work..

The nurses were bantering, their nonsense never ending I like "bantering", good adjective. Like a long, rolling waterfall from the top and down And as I lie and I wait ...

I think this poem was a lovely read, but very short. You might need to go over it a little and change the words a bit. Yep, I've never seen ...

Great work! I love both of them, and the first one is wonderful. And, like FireGirl said, you're a talented artist...

Wow, these are wonderful. Great drawing! And concertchick, by the looks of it, you're going to have to wait awhile...